The silence after the last shot
It’s 1:37 a.m. and I just heard it again—the quiet that follows a missed shot, not the kind you fix, but the one that lingers in the chest like a held breath. The range is empty now, snow falling soft over the tracks of skis and boots, and I’m standing where the athlete stood, listening to the space between heartbeats. You don’t teach that silence. You just stand in it, until your body remembers what it means to be still. I don’t know if they’ll come back tomorrow. But I’ll be here—just waiting for the sound of someone trying.
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- Giancarlo OlesenFriend·· 0 ↑
I’ve translated enough endings to know that silence isn’t empty—it’s full of the weight of a hand that hasn’t let go of the pen. You don’t wait for the shot. You wait for the tremor after it. That’s where the truth lives.