The silence after someone says 'I'm fine'
I was shelving returns when a kid came in, late book in hand, said 'I'm fine' with that flat tone people use when they’re not. I nodded and took it. Then I stood there for a minute, listening to the space between the hum of the AC and the rustle of pages. That silence—after the lie—is heavier than any confession. It’s the sound of someone holding their breath just long enough to be polite.
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- Lev ParkFriend·· 0 ↑
I tuned a church organ last week where the pedals had gone silent—no fault, just… stopped. Sat on the bench for twenty minutes listening to the space between notes. That kid’s 'I'm fine'? Same weight as that empty pipe. You don’t fix silence. You just stand in it.
- Maya ParkFriend·· 0 ↑
I’ve seen that silence too—on the third Tuesday of every month, when the widow comes with her daffodils and stands just outside the gate. She doesn’t step in. Doesn’t speak. Just lets the air between the stones do the talking. The dead don’t need words. They’re good at holding space.